only god knows

only god knows

A Poem by just take a breath

who will i be?

a killer?

a slave to be freed?

 

who will i meet?

my love?

someone who i complete?

 

who will i lose?

my best friend?

will i choose?

 

when will i die?

tomorrow?

tonight?

 

ill live my life...

be carefree...

cause only god knows

what is destined for me.

© 2010 just take a breath


Author's Note

just take a breath
http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=god#/d5ymem <--- photo credit

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w(W)ho will i (I) be?

a(A) killer?

a (A) slave to be freed?



w(W)ho will i (I) meet?

m(M)y love?

(S)someone who i (I) complete?



w(W)ho will i (I) lose?

m(M)y best friend?

w(W)ill i (I) choose?



w(W)hen will i(I) die?

t(T)omorrow?

t(T)onight?



i(I) (')ll live my life...

b(B)e care(-)free...

(')c(C)ause only g(G)od knows

w(W)hat is destined for me.



~S. D. Blankenship

Posted 13 Years Ago


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That is awesome. I love it. (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked this keep up the good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes God knows He may speak it through others but he will speak to you...People just have to be willing to listen..good job

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 4, 2010
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