a world without dreams

a world without dreams

A Poem by just take a breath

i stood still... leaving reality behind

im a dreamer... i believe things unreal

in this cold, cruel world...

is it wrong...

to see life's impossibilities, and call them real?

 

how do you live that way?

with no hope, happiness...

in dismay?

you cant tell yourself it wont happen.

you will know it is true when its said...

a world without dreams?

id rather be dead.

© 2010 just take a breath


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Author's Note

just take a breath
http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=a%20world%20without%20dreams&order=9&offset=24#/d2ujgtx <--- photo credit

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This is really good. It's so relateable. Great job. :)

~Love, Jami~

P.S. Sorry for the crappy review, normally they're better but I'm multitasking.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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