who am i, what have i become?

who am i, what have i become?

A Poem by just take a breath

looking back...

i wasn't always this way.

so into my looks...

so quiet, and afraid.

 

i was never this way...

afraid of what people might say

the world around me now...

has never felt so far away.

 

now im thinking

realization running through my head

noticing...

the things iv done and said.

 

lately...

iv been confused.

happy, yet overwhelmed

who am i?

what have i become?

© 2010 just take a breath


Author's Note

just take a breath
http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=broken%20mirror&order=9&offset=24#/d1as9fw <--- photo credit

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Thought evoking, i find myself asking the same questions every now and then

Posted 13 Years Ago


I've recently had this feeling and I kind if like it. Strong emotions here, it's a great poem. :)

~Love, Jami~

Posted 13 Years Ago



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about me? im 15, im a girl, im blond, and tend to take my feelings out through music and writing. if you knew me, you would know non-believers drive me insane! this includes people that say "your t.. more..

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