broken wings

i have these wings...

attached to my back

im ready to fly...

but i cant.

 

i wish one day...

you could see me sore

but healing my wounds

takes time...

just a little more

 

ill try to get away...

from this boring old place

they don't suit me...

these broken wings.

im hoping, praying, begging

they will work one day.

Author's Note

http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=broken+wings#/d2bzwec <--- broken wings

Reviews

[r]

That is amazing!!! Very well written and sad. (: Love it.

[cfix]

This is one amazing write. I love the opening of this write. Very nicely done.

[Jami Nicole]

This poem reminds me of Broken Wing by Martina McBride. It's simply wonderful and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. :)

~Love, Jami~