obsessed

obsessed

A Poem by just take a breath

through the hallways i am followed

watched by with every step.

millions around me...

i feel only two of us left.

 

you turn every corner

i take with a stride

i run... faster, faster

i run for my life

 

you call me on my phone

leave me messages online

did you know stalking is hurting?

did you know that its a crime?

 

we talk...

but i know what your thinking

"well be together one day...

if i lose you ill never stop looking, anyways"

 

so i carry on my days

and they pass by fast

leaving you in the dust,

until the next day, when you come back.

© 2010 just take a breath


Author's Note

just take a breath
http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=followed#/d2mrmv2 <---- photo credit

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Very disturbing on a level of how real this is. But I just adore how you wrote it especiall " You turn every corner, I take with stride" I can just imagine him being on your heels and it makes my heart reace a little and I read a little faster :) veryy well done

Posted 13 Years Ago


That's creeepyy but i like how you wrote it. i can really feel like what you were feeling.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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about me? im 15, im a girl, im blond, and tend to take my feelings out through music and writing. if you knew me, you would know non-believers drive me insane! this includes people that say "your t.. more..

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