I think it would be better without the extravagant formatting and colors. Those take away too much from the poem itself.
Anyway, a nice write, definitely, I liked the way it all came together at the end.
Keep writing!
Interesting use of colors and size. I usually don't utilize such techniques with the text myself, but I like it on your writing. The red speaks out.
As much as we'd all like to think we can, sometimes these things are too tough to swallow on our own. I think that realization is harder than the actual dealing with the problem itself.. or at least for some people, it is.
about me? im 15, im a girl, im blond, and tend to take my feelings out through music and writing.
if you knew me, you would know non-believers drive me insane! this includes people that say "your t.. more..