close your eyes

close your eyes

A Poem by just take a breath

the sunlight hits my face
letting me know its there
giving happiness and grace

i spread my arms out wide
like a butterfly
ready for flight

the image is in my mind
a smile
covering my joyous face
leaving all worries behind

so here i stand
ill close my eyes another time...
for im afraid
of the world at hand
but my world will always be a blink away...

© 2010 just take a breath


Author's Note

just take a breath
http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=close+your+eyes#/dqbu5f <--- photo credit

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simple and sweet, I love the butterfly comparison

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good One..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


simple and sweet.well writen while keeping that child like spirit

Posted 13 Years Ago


Amazing(:

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 7, 2010
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