you know that feeling?

you know that feeling?

A Poem by just take a breath

i say im fine and plaster a smile on my face

saying i dont know what happened betwwen us

saying i dont miss your eyes

your smile

or your taste

 

i laugh about it

say you were an a*****e. a mistake.

but inside i know

your the sweetest guy i knew...

no matter what you did or what you do

 

so you cheated

so you left

so you said you love me and waht you said you never ment

 

you know that broken hearted feeling?

the feeling im getting?

 

 

© 2010 just take a breath


Author's Note

just take a breath
http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=crying#/d1bo010 <--- photo credit

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I really loved this, it brought a punch to my soul. I've known that feeling many times... it hurts even more than you think. :/ I loved everything about this poem, plus it reminds me of my own writing. :)

~Lizzard~

Posted 14 Years Ago


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r
Oh god...I know exactly how this is...I can feel the pain in the words, or is that my own pain I'm feeling?

But yes, I know that feeling. All too well. Amazing. (: I love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


like it...now how to deal with this conundrum?

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great poem, Very well written!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Unfortuately this happens. The guy is never worth it but you love him anyway and you believe him everytime he tells you he loves you. I know this feeling all too well. Great write. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Awww): But you wrote it well

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice poem. I enjoyed.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Guys who cheat really aren't worth it. Good poem, though.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is heart breaking

Posted 14 Years Ago


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TJ
beautiful poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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