mirrors

your voice echo's inside me

like the whisper of the world

 

your words decide my pathway

as i struggle through your obstacles

 

your soul is like a mirror

you do this-

i do it to

 

your face is always remembered

like the tears me eyes shed

im done mirroring you

Reviews

[Rikkevi Rue]

for such a relatively short write you get your idea across well. It seems to me that you could exploit this piece to the result of a much greater yield. It has great potential!

This is really good, telling people to stay true to who they are. {Very nicely done}

[qaralynn]

interesting write..like it!

[akapr17other]

Hmm very interesting. I liked it:)

[Undying Glory]

cool work, i sure found this to cut far deeper than the seemingly simple lines you've used here. i love your title and that last stanza and also the length of this, short and real poignant. great job!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very creative! Never be something your not, be yourself!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Wow..!!! Fantastic imagination..!!!!

[Sweets]

Great start!
it has a nice flow.
Great job on this

[Coyote Poetry]

In the end. We will learn enough and must create our own image that we desire and want to be. I like the story and the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jami Nicole]

This is beautiful, it has great flow and great wording. Keep writing. :)