sing me to sleep

sing me to sleep

A Poem by just take a breath
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this isnt suppost to be a poem about hurting that someones gone from your life... but more or less about someone who left for a little while, but is coming back soon...

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Tonight, i rest my head down

With the ear buds in my ears

The soft spoken melody

Of our song brings me to tears

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I close my eyes and form an image

Of the memory once formed…

Of this song

Of mine and yours

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The poetic voice of an ipod

Brings you back to life

Count, one two three…

And sing me to sleep tonight

© 2011 just take a breath


Author's Note

just take a breath
every night i fall asleep to my ipod. i literally can not live without it... and every song, every word, every lyric reminds me of this guy im in love with... this isnt suppost to be a poem about hurting that someones gone from your life... but more or less about someone who left for a little while, but is coming back soon...

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Good one..!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think this is so beautiful. I love the last stanza the most because, of when you described the poignant memories that a song brings.

Posted 9 Years Ago


i love the last stanza of this. It read like a lullaby.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I live it! it seems so placid and sweet! I love the first stanza! great write! ^^

Posted 9 Years Ago


i like this poem a lot!
the truth is clearly stated and i like the way you describe how you fall asleep with your ipod!
great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice to have a kind voice to allow you to fall into a deep sleep. I like the way you made your emotion and feelings alive with kind and hopeful words. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on June 1, 2011
Last Updated on June 27, 2011
Tags: music, songs, love, dream, ipod, life, boy, girl, happy, sad, missing

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just take a breath
just take a breath

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about me? im 15, im a girl, im blond, and tend to take my feelings out through music and writing. if you knew me, you would know non-believers drive me insane! this includes people that say "your t.. more..

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