Suicidal

Slash coma

Suicidal

---------------------------------------------------------Linny's Pov---------------------------------------------

Knife, death, perfection. No knife, pain, fear, abuse, misery.

I took the knife sliding it deeply into my wrist. 1 more cut, I cut another. No 5 more, I thought sliding the deadly knife deeply into my skin. All I saw was blood then darkness.

------------------------------------------------------???'s Pov----------------------------------------------------

As the new neighbor in town I went house to house greeting them. I got to the 3rd house knocking on the door. Should I go in? Fine I will.  I walked in looking around, feeling bad for intruding. I got to the living room looking around then suddenly i saw blood on the floor. It was a trial into the kitchen, I went i and saw a purple haired girl with green eyes, but with deep bleeding cuts on her arms. 

*Two days later*

-------------------------------------------------Jack's Pov--------------------------------------------------------

Beep............................Beep..............................Beep...................Beep......................Beep

She's in a coma..... no. She can't be. If she dies I'll myself. Why did she do this to herself?! I love her!!!!!!!  "I know you can't hear me Linny but I've got to tell you I've always liked you and I'm sorry for not being there for you. If  you die I'll kill myself, I can't live without you alive. Please don't die on me. If you live I'll do everything you want. I've even broken up with Caitie for you. Just live. Please live, and let me into your life! I'll move in with you, get a job to pay for everything you want! I love you wake up." I started to cry when i was saying that, I just confessed my feelings to my true love and she can't even hear me! I got up to leave when I looked back hoping for a miracle.... Nothing, no twitch or anything. I have to stay.

*4 hours later*

Wake up, wake up, wake up, wake up, wake up! Dear god WAKE UP!!!!!!!!! Ok I've been aying that for 2 hours now, she's not waking up soon. Man she looks defenseless asleep. She's so pale. I stroked her cheek oh so lightly. I want to touch every part of her. It's 11:11 am. I've been here since 1:00 am yesterday. I miss her voice.

Author's Note

Do you like it? I do.

Reviews

[Jester]

Omigod!!! You aresuch an awesome writer dudete!!! Of course you already know that. But still. Love ya!!

[Max]

I love this and can't wait for the next chappy!

[doggylover65201]

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!1

[Short.Nerd]

It's pretty good and it seems sort of classic that he would say he loves her when she's in a coma.