I am Alienbaba

Meditative spoken word poem for your relaxation and peace of mind. Just 11 minutes and you shall feel fine.

http://www.reverbnation.com/rockstarmono/song/15866934-i-am-alienbaba-version-2-meditative

Do not worry...

Don't you shed no precious tear...

 I can comfort you Precious!

‎I am the sun, I am the one,

I am the fire-ball on the run,

I am your bed-tea

when your day has just begun!

And there is no need to hide from someone,

When my heart booms louder than the muzzle of the hunter's Gun!

Take my power...its yours for the taking,

These rays are my fingers..

 This warmth is my breath...

The tan on your skin is my present to you

and though it stings don't you moan..do feel glad.

I am the warm glow that pervades your being,

I am the September rush inside of you,

 I am the thought that makes you feel new,

 I am the color...the mud of the Earth,

‎ I come with valor...to warm your home's hearth

‎ I reside...in the confusion; the midst of your chaos,

I decide ...who comes where and where who goes,

 

I am the Sun, I am the one!

http://youtu.be/WPBUM6AY7YY

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Author's Note

Pls listen to the mp3 too. Thanks!

Reviews

[Nona]

Oh!!!!!!! you ARE the one! this musical meditative poem blew away my mind! it is just hypnotically beautiful and seductive! I love how you married music with poetry to give a birth to this piece which talks about a great mystery... who are you ? - the God of eternal energy...

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I am very happy you found this poem worthy enough for a review and in your own valuable words you have shown me kindness here. God of eternal energy...yes that thought sounds nice...only if the universe could be saved from collapsing unto itself inversely. As you know...I have no control over anti-matter ...the bane of my existence and the by-product of creation:) But as I said...those are my problems...and i shall take care of you all till the very end.:)

[Nona]

:-) You clearly have giant imagination - bigger than the STAR of the SUN :) take care!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hahah
what lovely words...thxx

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

[Ahmad Cox]

This sounds like it could be a song

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

just two little lines.....I...AM.....ONE....have been sung in the mp3....thx...just as a statement

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

Beautiful ^_^

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thx you Hadeel

[CS]

Keep shining, Kiddo ;)
I don't know if you calmed me down or exhilarated me but thanks either way!!!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I am shining on Courtney come what may.....and reflecting your light to others...
thanks you so much again

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the poem very much---all these things i can be for you and with you...and how i can ease your day.

i would leave the last line out...would make the poem feel much more universal.

jacob

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Point noted and last last edited out sir:) thanku for your kindness.

[Chris]

Welcome back man

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thank you sir!
Looks like am back here again for a brief spell!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Kiddo, bravo bravo, this was quite an enjoyable read, calming and full of energy, "Don't Worry" I feel protected all ready. thanks for beautiful, happy feel good to warm this cold Monday! :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes i was expecting that strong reply:)

[Becky C Strukamp]

I work hard to please!!!!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

lol

[Suzy Q]

This had a really nice flow, I enjoyed it.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I hope u can listen to the mp3 below the text too and download for ur listening pleasure at your leisure:)
Thanks Suze

[Carolann Dowsett]

This is awesome, I love the spoken poem too. Takes you on a journey to the warmth of the sun.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Bask in the warm warmth my child:)

[Carolann Dowsett]

:)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

(*_*)

[Relic]

This is very creatively done and so soothing. The music along with your voice is excellent and fits your thoughts so well. How were you able to post it to WC? Just curious.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Dear Relics...thnk u for ur kind words.
WC supports hot-linking and embedding of some secure applets from known sites.
Open an account at www.reverbnation.com and upload your mp3 then when it appears on the page assigned you there....there is a small share button which lets you grab the code for that specific work or the whole collections of your work....this code can then be pasted into your poem along with text here at wc. :) Hope to see your work too.

[Relic]

Thank you very much for the info, someday in the future I'll give it a try.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yes do