I am Alienbaba

Meditative spoken word poem for your relaxation and peace of mind. Just 11 minutes and you shall feel fine.

http://www.reverbnation.com/rockstarmono/song/15866934-i-am-alienbaba-version-2-meditative

Do not worry...

Don't you shed no precious tear...

 I can comfort you Precious!

‎I am the sun, I am the one,

I am the fire-ball on the run,

I am your bed-tea

when your day has just begun!

And there is no need to hide from someone,

When my heart booms louder than the muzzle of the hunter's Gun!

Take my power...its yours for the taking,

These rays are my fingers..

 This warmth is my breath...

The tan on your skin is my present to you

and though it stings don't you moan..do feel glad.

I am the warm glow that pervades your being,

I am the September rush inside of you,

 I am the thought that makes you feel new,

 I am the color...the mud of the Earth,

‎ I come with valor...to warm your home's hearth

‎ I reside...in the confusion; the midst of your chaos,

I decide ...who comes where and where who goes,

 

I am the Sun, I am the one!

http://youtu.be/WPBUM6AY7YY

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Author's Note

Pls listen to the mp3 too. Thanks!

Reviews

[Nona]

Oh!!!!!!! you ARE the one! this musical meditative poem blew away my mind! it is just hypnotically beautiful and seductive! I love how you married music with poetry to give a birth to this piece which talks about a great mystery... who are you ? - the God of eternal energy...

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I am very happy you found this poem worthy enough for a review and in your own valuable words you have shown me kindness here. God of eternal energy...yes that thought sounds nice...only if the universe could be saved from collapsing unto itself inversely. As you know...I have no control over anti-matter ...the bane of my existence and the by-product of creation:) But as I said...those are my problems...and i shall take care of you all till the very end.:)

[Nona]

:-) You clearly have giant imagination - bigger than the STAR of the SUN :) take care!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

hahah
what lovely words...thxx

[Dr. Wood ?]

shine on!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

FLASH!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Great! You are artistic. I like the colors. I like the mp3.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thx Dhaye:)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

In the spoken word....I ran out of words cause the music had been programmed for exactly 10 minutes and 55 seconds...so I extemporized on the spot...with modified repeats and if you would like to recite it for your pleasure....just ask and I shall post the "minus-one (without my voice) the music of this poem. Exclusively for your free download and preview.

[Nick.B]

Interesting piece, love the way you expressed you feelings with this one...great job..also the song is great

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thanks Nic. its fresh from the oven mp3///

[Chavon]

Groovy man!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

heys...i know i know...do download and remember me by

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

The poem itself was very bright, cheery, and beautiful. I enjoyed reading it :-) The spoken poem was awesome~ I like all the ethereal, other-worldly sounds. The voice was clear and full of just the right emotion. Reading the poem and hearing it were two very distinct experiences. Very cool altogether :-)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

thx Moody ...u are a Gem...
I used four basic sounds for the music track....Echo-raindrops, Bubbling stream, Drumkit, Contrabass and a sitar...along with my voice emulated in a underground tunnel...

[Yari Garcia (Older Profile)]

It sounded very cool. You could probably make those serene CD's with your poetry if you wanted to.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

oh yes i will thx for the inspiration i hope u read my other poem When Enlightenment rings too...itrs part 3

[writing mojo]

hypnotic tract running
the mind on vacation from the body,
broken by the vision of skin being the cover
from soul in love with the dawn of a new age..great vibe you address in this voiced out peace..good stuff

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Hey writing Mojo...thank you for your emotive expressive review ...it makes me so much more happier to receive these positive vibes for my work from you guys.

[Sheila Kline]

Your poem is like warm milk to a troubled soul! This is absolutely wonderful.........thank you so much for sharing such a welcomed piece of tranquility!! Spoken word poems are among my very favorites!!

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Ma'am thank you and am honored to have you review my work in your beautiful words....since you also love the spoken word form...would you listen to my TO BE ENLIGHTENED poem on the page too...?!
Its similar and part 3 of this one.

[Silhouette]

Really relaxing and cool sounding. I love the flow of your words, too. Full of passionate emotions… Awesome job :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Thanks you silhouette....i recorded it a night:)