The Risk

Delicate and fragile
like the time I left you
the future separates and divides
it teaches us to cry
cuts with surgical precision
life from other lives
friends from other friends
dreams from the dangling nerve ends
of restless modern trends.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

I like this. It's very philosphical work. I believe these words could describe countless things in life and still be true!
Not just risk, but fear, passion, love, hate, anger, even hunger.
This was a tremendous creation! I can't say much more then that. It's a thinker, so i'm thinking...

[Legion]

It is strange how it moves that way. Great way of presenting that. I like it. Kudos.