I love ribbons and cotton candies~

I love ribbons and cotton candies~

 

Ribbons in my hair and cotton candy in my mouth

The sweetest joy a girl can ever ask for...

I love long flowing ribbons and how they trail after me

The taste of sugared cloud...

I think angels are lucky as they are surrounded in clouds

 

I love ribbons and cotton candies~

 

Ribbons round my wrist and the smell of cotton candy in the air

The most passionate a woman can ever ask for

I love the long ribbons and how they bind my limbs

The sweet smell of sex...

I think angels envy us as they can’t taste this sweet sin

 

I love ribbons and cotton candies~

Author's Note

Trying to convey the passing of time and how a sweet little girl can still love the same thing but in much different context. I dont think I did it well here... please bash and give suggestions and whatnots.

Reviews

[StoryTailor]

Wowserz. I definitely saw the two little girls that lived inside of one body. (haha?) Anyway, I liked how you did that. It's a nice poem. Good job with writing it!

[Weaza]

I think the poem actually did show the two personalities of the sweet young girl. Well writen, continue writing!

~Weaza~