The Honey Eyes

A poem about a girl who was shy, but desired adventure. A poem about a girl who wish she could be, and was.

"Words are a funny thing. There are a select few people who can do something much more than simply speak or sing with them -- they craft them to make magic."

For those kids who make something odd,

Those kids who you thought,

that God can make foolish flawed souls.

For those kids that created the beast,

how could an ugly thing create such beauty,

When we fall west, they fall east.

But I just think that they've been abandoned,

from the real world for so long,

They created their own that had a special gold.

When the world they have created,

has a floral scent,

they will continue to not be accepted.

But remember this,

a baby of yours will appear,

and one day,

They to, could have Honey Eyes.

Author's Note

Please enjoy!

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

I told you the first day, you can be one of the best writers of this website and the magical creation you have created here seems to prove it....The thought behind this poem is just unbelievably amazing and they is a deep felt work in it....One of the most unique writing i have ever read.....You just blown my mind away.....I don't think i have any words to say.....Its a masterpiece im honestly speaking mate.....Full ratings!!!!!

[Efflorescence Honey]

Awe thanks for that, but I don't think I'm all that popular, nor am I tryin' to be c: I write for the sake how it makes me happy like how helping others makes you happy♡ but I just read this comment once I woke up, and it truly made my morning! Thank you

[Selena D. Harper]

Gosh! you r mindblowing lol.You got honey eyes?? Aha!!Well written.Keep going like this.Haha lol.

[Efflorescence Honey]

Ahaha, why thank you so much. Oh, no, not me. I don't :) And of course; I sure will!:D

[Nicole Schuster]

Creative word choice, great flow, amazing originality and delivery. Well done. Pleasure to read :)

[Efflorescence Honey]

Awe! Thank you so very much :)

[JoshuaCmngs]

You just wrote something so far out of my league, I am probably going to jump off a cliff. I mean...It's just... Wow. Wow is all I can really say. I feel like I just died halfway through this, then came back to life because it's a crime not to finish a poem this good. I can't give you any constructive criticism because I am not good enough to go anywhere near this poem.

[JoshuaCmngs]

P.S: I didn't cry, but that was on;y because i was too shocked to feel emotion after this, but if the poem hadn't affected me to the point of insanity, I MIGHT have cried.....MIGHT HAVE.

[Efflorescence Honey]

Awwww, how sweet :) but, jumping off cliffs and death is not allowed haha! Buy really, thank you so much.
P.s.
You must not cry often. I bet you would cry if someone pours hot sauce in your eye, though :o

[JoshuaCmngs]

I really don't, and I would definitely cry if I had an acidic liquid pored into my eyeball xD