The Falling of TearsA Poem by RachaelNot done yet.. what do you think? Suggestions for editing?
Previous Version This is a previous version of The Falling of Tears. And this day, unlike all the rest, was overcast and lifeless. The story begins as most of them do, with a girl and her father, an almost inseparable two.
You see, it begins in a time before nearly all can remember, only these tales enlightening us on how things came to be.
The story begins before that rainy day arrived, when this girl and her dad lived a most content life. She grew up within the most powerful place imaginable; a palace for the super natural beings and their families. Her dad, none the less, was the supreme ruler of everyone and everything, no matter how big or small. He created the earth and the ocean, the sky and the water, the trees and the waves, the grass and the seaweed; but what you and I see today on land is far from what was seen then. Before she was born, the trees and plants were bare, with not a leaf in sight. People did not even know what one was, for they never experienced it in their lives.
But none the less, as soon as she was born, leaves began to appear on every plant imaginable. Her mother and father first saw a rosy pink face and quickly decided the perfect name for their child; Rosie. As most tales go, sadness must go along with happiness. So therefore, on Rosie’s seventh birthday, her loving mother unexpectedly passed away. The two continued to live on with their lives, always with a hole in their torn hearts.
As the years continued on, Rosie and her father were always curious, always pondering where the leaves came from. Of course, if you remember, her father invented everything else in the world, and that made him especially inquisitive.
Upon turning the age of thirteen, Rosie had grown a new found sense of independence. She began to wander around the palace, finding new places and learning new things. Even so, Rosie quickly grew out of the confined and over protected building. She yearned for more experiences and learning new things. As time passed, she plotted a way to get around the palace guards to freedom. At age thirteen, it was finally finished. Finally, Rosie would be able to travel outside and discover what her true purpose in life is.
One night, after everyone in the palace was fast asleep, she executed the plan. Duck under windows, tip toe around doors, Climb all the way up to the top floor and then scale the building. Such a dangerous task, yet one her heart was telling her to do.
Finally, Rosie touched ground once again. She began on her voyage, not knowing where it would take her. She roamed the rolling hills, walked through the open valleys, and finally came upon a small village; a long way away from her home. “Something feels different,” she heard herself whisper; and even in that quite voice it broke the eerie silence which consumed the air. The difference, though, she did not know. As Rosie continued to pace herself into the town, she noticed the emptiness. Empty homes, empty stores, empty streets.
Then, without any notice, appeared a wolf. His hair gray, like an old man, yet with bright blue eyes that were impossible to look away from. Rosie stared at him and he stared right back. There was a connection, as if they had known each other for years.
Slowly, step by step, they came closer to each other. Out of nowhere, she heard a voice; deep, like something out of a frightening story you would read. Rosie looked around, curious, and then found herself again looking into the wolf’s eyes. The voice sounded again. “I know you,” he said. “Do not be frightened. To me you are Rosalie, and forever shall be.”
Rosie was scared out of her mind, for why wouldn’t she be? She asked the wolf in a stuttered voice, “How.. how do you know me?” He replied in the same deep voice, “I have known you since before you knew yourself. I have known your destiny; I have known we would meet on this day.” Her reply in a voice shakier than before was that the wolf had not answered her. They continued their discussion in the abandoned town, never moving closer, never sitting, never blinking.
Rosie found out that everything she had done, her exploring and escaping the castle, had been her destiny and what the wolf set out for her to do. Confused for a moment, she said nothing, the town back to its eerie and silent nature.
The most stunning was the wolf’s next words that broke the silence.
Rosie found out that everything she had done, her exploring and escaping the castle, had been her destiny and what the wolf set out for her to do. Confused for a moment, she said nothing, the town back to its eerie and silent nature.
The most stunning was the wolf’s next words that broke the silence.
He said, “You created the leaves.” Completely perplexed, Rosie responded, “What.. What do you mean I created the leaves? How is that possible?” she contested. The wolf went on to explain how when she was born, each tear drop any person or animal shed would transform into a leaf. He was sent by Rosie’s dad, creator of all, to meet with Rosie and inform her on the importance she played in the role of earth. The last thing the wolf told Rosie was that it was their role to travel across the world and tell every animal and human not to be afraid to cry; that it is ok and will help the earth when they do, and finally, to only let the others know her as Rosalie. For Rosie was only a name her family and closest friends would know her as. © 2010 RachaelAuthor's Note
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