That place...

I don't really know what this is... haha But it is actually pubished so, yeah... Must be good, right? O.o

You know that place?

 

That place between happiness and sadness

where you don't know exactly how you feel?

 

You don't feel like laughing

but you don't feel like crying either.

 

You just want to lay in bed

with the bed sheets covering every inch of your body

and just staring at the fasinating details of the ceiling above you

with the lights off and

the sunlight shinning though the cracks in the curtains.

So it's not completly dark

but the room isn't shinning like Heaven either.

 

And then your friends ask you to hang out

but you say "no thanks"

because you don't want them to ask "what's wrong?"

because the truther is

you have no clue.

 

You don't know what's wrong.

It's just this big confusing pit in the bottom of your stomach.

 

You know that place?

 

Author's Note

grammar? spelling errors? anything wrong? can you think of any improvements?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to have days when you can be alone and think. Not always good to be surrounded by people. I like days where I have my pen and paper/quiet. I understand the desire of the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[SmileBig :)]

Oh my god this is fantastic I just love it! Wonderful! I know that place!!! Been there for days right now.

[Dark Tower]

I think its a very beautiful piece, The imagery is amazing, very nice read.

[deepblue04]

Yes, Yes I do know that place! I don't think theres any grammatical errors from what I can see. Good job!

[Cole Hayley]

No grammar or spelling errors as far as I can tell. The piece it self is brillant, I loved every bit of it. no complaints

[XxTheFallenAngelxX]

You describe how I feel in such detail... Good job!

[Starr Mist]

Very good, I know that place all to well.
I love the word choice is fantastic!
Thanks for posting!
Starr Mist

[RachelReaper]

I didn't find any mistakes in the poem, but yes, I know that place. I call it Limbo, and once your in Limbo, its hard to pull yourself back out...

[The Watcher]

This is a really interesting poem, and I can say I know exactly how this "neutral zone" feels like. Nonetheless, great poem Samantha and kudos!