Dawn And Sunset

Dawn And Sunset

A Poem by Sami Khalil
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Contemplations...

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Dawn and sunset By Sami Khalil

 

And at the hour of manifestation;

All lights shed

All times shed

All tears shed

All thoughts shed

Greet the sunset of lamentation.


And at the hour of realization;

All lights shed

All times shed

All tears shed

All thoughts shed

Greet the sunrise of exultation.     

© 2018 Sami Khalil


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I really love your overall message, which I firmly believe in, no matter how yukky life may feel at times. Eventually the darkness ends & the sunrise begins. And you've found an interesting & original way to convey this old axiom. It's fun to watch you experiment outside the dots of your usual writing style. Nicely thought-provoking & impactful! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow! So true and well articulated dear poet and friend. I do know you embrace it all with your fight.. read more
Wow bravo what a spiritful sunset of lamentation and exultation of sunrise....I so love to see sunset and sunrise and this vivid view is another love of it .. Another beautiful piece ...
Thankyou for sharing !


Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow! I can't thank you enough Lilly Finch for this marvelous review and kind visit. All rich blessin.. read more
Lily Finch

2 Years Ago

No problem , thanks to you too ..and you muchly welcome !
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

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I feel the spirit merging with nature, becoming one entity, that's a secret of being blessed, to be grateful, to let it be... whatever it is, accpet and let it be, then the growth to something greater will be, so the pain and happiness in life, all the opposites in life, You've embraced life itself, how to live gratefully through it, Your words have a powerful effect over us.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

"I feel the spirit merging with nature, becoming one entity, that's a secret of being blessed, to be.. read more
Light

2 Years Ago

You are spoiling me my friend, I also love and cherish everything You say to me, thank You, greatly*.. read more
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

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Powerful words and thoughts shared. You left something for the reader to ponder upon. Thank you Sami for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow! Thank you too beloved poet and friend for this amazing review and kind words. All appreciated.... read more
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

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I can sense the metaphor and picture that it tried to depict. A very vivid view with the sunset of lamentation and sunrise of exultation. Felt like it gave a warm red carpet treatment to the journey of the sun. Great work!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow! Thank you so much Drika for the visit and lovely take on this poem. Be blessed...
moog-drika

2 Years Ago

my pleasure :D
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

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A top thought-provoking, attention poem that makes you notice all you said. wow..

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Feed back inspires us more. Thank you kindly...
Dawn

2 Years Ago

my pleasure
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

:::::;:))))))))
well penned!! Few words are approaching best. Keep it up 👆
Sneh

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

Wow! Many and many thank yous to you Sneh and to your visit.
Sneh

2 Years Ago

More than welcome.!☺
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

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The great cycle of beginning and ending. Life and death. And then ressurection.
"Greet the sunrise of exultation"
Very well penned



Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow! So true and well articulated. Thank you Jodash for the time and visit.
dear Sami... regrets are part of the silver lining as we
near the rainbow of our life... the colors reflecting the
sunshine as well as the purple rain... the spring of pink and blue...
the fall of gold and magenta... a book on a shelf edged in love. truly, Pat

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow! So true and well articulated. Thank you so much Patricia Wedel for this wonderful review and sh.. read more
I like it. I wonder in the morning. Take time to think. Then, I get to contemplate in the evening.
The problem is I still wonder while I sleep.

Nice one.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Wow! So true and well said. Thank you so much Jon for the time and visit. All appreciated.
Jon Roggie

3 Years Ago

My pleasure.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:::::::)))))))))

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