Why Should I Believe In Love?

Why Should I Believe In Love?

A Poem by Samantha Grace
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A sappy broken heart poem...

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What is love anyway?

Is it something we're really supposed to believe in?

 

I believe in broken hearts

I believe in lies

I believe in saying hello

And you not bothering to say goodbye

I believe that I was wrong

And I don't believe that you were right

I don't understand why this goes on

Fight, after fight, after fight

You told me that you loved me

That you would never be cruel

Yet you've done the opposite

You've made me into a fool

So tell me, why should I believe in you?

After everything, yes, everything

You've put me through

You've stepped on my heart

You've stepped on my toes

When this will end

I don't think anyone knows

But it's carried on for way to long

So why won't I say goodbye?

I love you just too damn much

But you, my love, have made my heart cry

© 2009 Samantha Grace


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Samantha Grace
Haven't edited it, just typed it up....

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So very powerful!!! By the time I got to the end, I was becoming choked with tears. Really love those last lines. Keep up the great work and keep on writing!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is so heartfelt and sad. It's exactly how I feel someone right now!!!! Brought me to tears! I like the first 2 lines in particular - What is love anyway? Is it something we're really supposed to believe in? I find those very relevant questions. Just wish I could find the answers...

Great poem!!!!!!!!

Josie


Posted 15 Years Ago


"What is love anyway?"
"Is it something we're really supposed to believe in?"

These two questions posed were a brilliant start to this piece. Unfortunately, sometimes love takes our hearts hostage and we have no choice but to believe in it. Both its pleasures and pains become very real, very quick. There is a since of confusion and resignation through out this poem that I found to be delightful. A wonderful write.

JadedSparrow



Posted 15 Years Ago


So why won't I say goodbye?
I love you just too damn much
But you, my love, have made my heart cry

Love these lines here, this is heartfelt and emotional.


Posted 15 Years Ago


I really like this piece, it shows true emotion. When you love someone so much you can't explain why you put up with the things that you do. I can totally relate to the emotion expressed here...I love the ending...
"So why won't I say goodbye?
I love you just too damn much
But you, my love, have made my heart cry".....Great write!


Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow I really like this.
Good job

Posted 15 Years Ago


"I love you just too damn much

But you, my love, have made my heart cry"

I like this rant, shows a ton of emotion. Nicely done.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on January 6, 2009

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Samantha Grace
Samantha Grace

Simpsonville, SC



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I'm Samantha. I'm 18. I don't remember not writing or reading. I have a little boy born 9/13/2007 [Shawn]. He is my heart, my life, my everything. I'm engaged to his dad [Dustin]. I also love art, mus.. more..

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