Faith

Faith

A Poem by sansrity sinha

Yesterday and today

And probably forever

My heart would skip a beat

And time would seem to stall forever…


For not a single day has passed

When you have failed to cross my mind,

All my dreams surround you;

All emotions move around you!


As you are light in darkness…

You are warmth in harsh winters!

You add to my smiles;

You have always stolen my frown…


No matter how hard I try to get away

How hard I try to recall your sins against me

The radiance of your fake love

Always appears to shield the bitter truth!


I wonder why this bias?

Why can’t I see what is true?

Where has all rationality vanished!

Why is light of practicality so diminished?


Then I realize, the rosy picture of yours in my mind

Still stands tall and firm against all your sins

The power of mind surprises me then!

Human nature puts me on back foot!


Since my mind is governed by your thoughts;

What is true doesn’t appear to be true;

And what is false is always backed up,

By unending river of blind faith!

 

 

 

 

© 2016 sansrity sinha


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Wow. That was amazing. Truly great poem. You should be very proud :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


I loved the meaning!!
Keep up the great work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is great, uh this makes it so hard to decide a winner :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

5 Years Ago

thank you so much! :)
I agree with Willard. You might have used 'will' instead of 'would' in lines 3 and 4. Watch your tenses. Valentine

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love is blind is where you are. In love people are abused and disrespected, but it goes on because the love is still felt or the pain is to great to let go. Nicely done with beautiful flow. The love comes through even if painful.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sansrity sinha

5 Years Ago

thank you so much for the review! :)
Very nice poem..i enjoyed reading it..Keep it up..

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sansrity sinha

5 Years Ago

glad hat you liked it! thank you
There is an honest artist in you who is governed by honest feelings. Overall, an amazing poem. Keep it up.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sansrity sinha

5 Years Ago

thanks a lot! :)
Truth be told, the heart isn't rational. Sometimes it's our salvation...other times, our doom...but our heart should never be ignored, just cautioned. All these words, you got out of me with a great piece of work...

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sansrity sinha

5 Years Ago

thank you so much! :)

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