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A Poem by sansrity sinha

Deep down in my heart

Buried deep in my thoughts

I never could read my mind

Until, you asked me…


It is strange how slowly

Life transforms beautifully

Slow and steady,

Things change miraculously


With each passing moment

I want to know more

I want things to grow

Slowly yet surprisingly


I wish I could elaborate

What I feel for you,

But alas! I’m short of words

May be of a language too


Jinxed in my thoughts,

Surrounded by a realm of emotions

Short of courage, locked in shyness

I fail to confess what lies within…


So I leave things on time,

Partly also on destiny

Waiting for things to evolve

Slowly, yet beautifully.

 

© 2016 sansrity sinha


Author's Note

sansrity sinha
could not fix the title yet. suggestions for title are most welcome

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"So I leave things on time,
Partly also on destiny
Waiting for things to evolve
Slowly, yet beautifully."
These lines were so beautiful, I couldn't stop reading them again and again!
I could relate so much with the feels.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautifully penned down!
"So I leave things on time,
Partly also on destiny
Waiting for things to evolve
Slowly, yet beautifully."

these lines are driving me crazy, I must say!

keep writing :D

Posted 3 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

3 Years Ago

Haha..thank you so much ..feelings deep down my heart..
Hello sansrity sinha,

It is a good poem. Very beautifully written. The font goes with this poem so well too!

I would like to clarify one thing. In this line "I never could read my mind" you say my mind. Did you mean your mind? I ask because it seems strange that you are unable to read your own mind.

As for a title suggestion: Words Cannot Say? Just a thought . . .

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi

Posted 3 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

3 Years Ago

Hi schatzi,
Thank you so much for the review..yes..i meant my mind..thats what makes those fe.. read more
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What a lovely flow of words... "The secret confession"... i guess will be a good title to this one....very well written though... good one :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


sansrity sinha

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much..:)..specifically for the title..it just fits so perfectly..bith to the scenario a.. read more
Anurag

3 Years Ago

you are welcome :) its actually very well written ....
With me and my husband [now deceased] we knew each other as good friends before we knew that we loved each other. Valentine

Posted 3 Years Ago



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