I Wish

I wish,
everyone on this earth,
be happy..!
I wish,
no one in this world,
be lonely..!
i wish,
everyone on this earth,
gets what they need..!
I wish,
everyone helps the other,
in need..!
i wish,
everyone be away
from greed..!
i wish,
there be no discrimination, on
the basis of cast, color or creed..!

I wish,
everyone is blessed, with
a best friend in need..!
I wish,
no trees ever be, without
leaves...!
I wish,
everyone be gifted, with
eternal peace...!
I wish,
our earth  be enriched,
with greenery...!

i wish,
everything on this earth be, as
it is supposed to be....!
i wish,
every butterfly,
always spreads peace....!
I wish,
the birds always sing,
melodiously.........!


i wish,
our earth be the best place to see,
enriched with,  LOVE, PEACE and HARMONY....!


so that,
one day even when God sees,
he's bound to say.....
"oh, that's heavenly...!!"
this is the best place, i could ever see..
because, here dwells, humanity,
and this is something,
which makes this place, really,
lovely........!!
the real place,
where i should actually be.....
truly.....!

Author's Note

thank you very much for reading.....
please give your reviews and rate it...!!!

Reviews

[annie lee]

You have described Paradise, and if it existed here on Earth, it would be doubly so. I guess I am too cynical to envision this world, since I am blinded by the way it is today. If everyone had your faith, your integrity, your energy -- maybe it would work. You are a beautiful light and I do not wish to dim that in any way. Hold your lamp high, Saumya, and maybe you can begin to change this world. Brava.

[Caradoc]

Wishes and dreams are important things to nurture. As wishes go, this one is pretty good. I hope it comes true.

-Caradoc

[Mark]

A great wish... but maybe, just maybe, the world is just waht it is supposed to be?

[Jack...]

It seems we wish the same things. Very happy feeling. I know I am happier from reading your poem.

[DIVYA]

Such sweet and idealistic thoughts...The world would be a better place if we had more of such feelings going around. Just great...

[Saumya]

thank you so much dear...for the really lovely review..!!
:)

[Astro]

I think the next time you have a birthday cake in front of you you should recite these lines to yourself and blow out the candles. Very nice sentiments you have listed here Saumya. The grammar was pretty good, but be careful of your verb tenses.

[Saumya]

allright.....
thank you soooooooo much, my dear friend, for the lovely review..!!
will work more to improve my grammmar as you said, and will give my level best in my next poems...!!
regards,
saumya

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Yes at times we wish so many things like this, in reality the world is the way it is, but it is always nice to hold on to hope and try to be that positive someone for those around us. Can't wait to actually see a place where these wishes will come true, only when Jesus comes back will there finally be peace, joy, and love and everyone finally completed. This is how I see it.

Good Job

[SteveB]

A kind and gentle wish. Thank you for sharing it and for sharing the better angels of ourselves.

[Baby Ricochet]

Those are some good wishes. Your a good kid Saumya

[Rhea752]

It was a very nice uplifting poem, but I as the pessimist I am know that humanity would not be humanity without sin.