High Tide

High Tide

A Poem by schlanks

We are water
A machine
And I, a working piece
Have been moved quite a ways
A telltale sign of waves

© 2023 schlanks


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I enjoyed your last line, This is really good.

Posted 3 Months Ago


schlanks

3 Months Ago

Thank you Meg
Kind of truthful in a way. enjoyed this write

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

schlanks

4 Months Ago

Thank you!

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 Added on December 10, 2023
Last Updated on December 10, 2023
Tags: water, waves, beach, summer, emotion, joy, short, poem, poetry, lyrical

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schlanks
schlanks

NJ



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I'm here to write poetry, read poetry, and make friends. 28. NJ cat lover. Occasional skier. I feel that a poem is successful when I feel lighter having written it. I am also working on my first.. more..

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