Reprocessed Rain

The swell of clouds crowds us close

A bustling world now walled in scope

Bathed in listening humidity

Is the pull of an emergent memory

A greeting from that yet to come, recalling me

The vapor voice fades with haste

Bygones resurface in its wake

Reminiscing while the young one wonders

As we converge we heed the timeless comfort

As warm light frames the glass display of thunder

Author's Note

All feedback welcome.

Reviews

[poetgurl (Plainly Meg)]

I love this write, loved those last 3 lines.

[schlanks]

Thank you glad you enjoyed

[June bug]

Reminiscing while the young one wonders
As we converge we heed the timeless comfort
As warm light frames the glass display of thunder

LOVE this part, this is a really good write.
It felt kind of intense there at the end.
Awesome write

[schlanks]

Thank you so much June! Sorry not sure how I didn't see this review earlier

[Anastasia]

Good rhyming. And I adore this word tango.

[schlanks]

Thank you glad you enjoyed!

[Nyx Untamed]

I love the intensity and proximity of this.
World now walled in scope
And glass display of thunder particular favourites. Beautiful

[schlanks]

Thank you! It definitely came out more intense than I was initially anticipating