Black Ice Sky

A Poem by schlanks

N i g h t s k y s e a s o n

Lines the paths that lead to you

And I, in admiration

Resign to watch the falling view

Untrampled starlight disregards me

Leading home only my dreams

© 2023 schlanks

Author's Note

All feedback welcome. The first line is spaced out like that because I kept getting error 003 when I tried to publish it normally and I don't know why.

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poetgurl (Plainly Meg)

A wonderful write here, well written

Posted 3 Months Ago

3 Months Ago

Thank you I appreciate it

Matthew Kult

Sweetly cute, dreamily romantic

Good read

With love

Matthew

Posted 4 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Months Ago

Thank you!

June bug

life would be kind of meaningless without a dream, Enjoyed the read

Posted 4 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

4 Months Ago

Thank you!

Arundass TP

Dreams are building blocks of expectations. Great writing

Posted 4 Months Ago

4 Months Ago

Thank you!

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Added on December 15, 2023
Last Updated on December 15, 2023
Tags: winter, snow, snowfall, stars, night, starlight, sky, dream, love, unrequited, pining, poem, poetry, short, lyrical

Author

schlanks

NJ

About

I'm here to write poetry, read poetry, and make friends. 28. NJ cat lover. Occasional skier. I feel that a poem is successful when I feel lighter having written it. I am also working on my first.. more..