A~~~~~~~a~

~humbled flower seeking water~

Tulip patterns in crimson

tattooed

on the underside of my phantom eucharist

a portrait between my hands

I pour the color from my eyes

into the glass

under a windmill

orbiting blades against the clouds

I am looking for you in the frame

drawing hearts in the condensation

with my fingertip . . . .

 

 

©2010SELENESKYE

Author's Note

~waiting for the powder blue vase to fill with water for the flower~

Reviews

[Solidad]

"drawing hearts in the condensation with my fingertip . . . ."
I often find myself doing that. Simply put and it gets the point across quite eloquently. I commend you for that because this poem wouldn't have had the same effect if you would've drowned it in...oh hell what's the word I'm looking for...extravagant wording. (Isn't exactly what I was going for but it works.) You know when to hold back as oppose to drenching the reader with excess. Bravo =)

[Maurice]

Very inspiring and inspired.

[JelliFyshKissUs]

I have never seen a parched flower of want painted with such quenching brush strokes. Standing Ovation! Encore!

[Kerry O'Connor]

Visually beautiful and the pic is a great abstract compliment to your piece.

[C]

Such a stunning visual, kitty.

[Brad]

this one bloomed from the fertile soil of your mind, everytime it's something different with you...still that same voice...but told in a different vein...

[Geralyn Miller]

Beautiful, heartlifting; the images you paint cling to the mind like ivy climbing a castle wall.

[KatiePie]

I can't stop reading your work, there's something so addicting about the way you form a world through words and give an escape to the black holes in our lives.

[Crowley]

It is so weird how you can paint with such a giant brush strokes and all the details just start leaking down the page revealing a new crack, crevice or tiny intricacy with evey half second it sits drying. I loved this...visual beyond belief, kinesthetic to the core. Nice...

[Intern'l Shultzfeather]

Holy red vision
spilling Blue Rock Falls.
Thirsty Spirit Goblet beams you, My God,
love to the fill.

[Kesha]

Very gorgeous! I really liked this one! :) Very enjoyable! :) Thank you for sharing! :) Keep it up!