KingFisher

An acrostic poem in the form "abcd....z"

As I lay leisurely on ma bed,
Beckoning my hubby to come near,
Carefully showing him the bird,
Decorated in bright colors,
Elegant looks,
Furious while the catching the prey,
Gesturing him to watch the bird
Hiding from behind the window,
Ink blue colored bird flew from the tree,
Jetted in high speed towards the pond,
King in fishing, ah ha should admit!
Lowering from its height,
Made its way, sweeping in the water,
Noticed a shiny silvery fish,
Opening its beak, it sailed swiftly,
Penetrating its beak into the water,
Quick and easily catching its prey,
Rushing away from the place,
Splashing water all around,
Tripping up in the air
Using its feathery wings, it flew high,
Vividly coloring a picture in ones mind
With a memory that will never forget
Xanthic orangish colored breast and belly,
Yelling in satisfaction were its sharp eyes,
Zeal to achievement of catching a fish!




Sensational

May 25, 2010

• Simply Anything
• KingFisher

Blue-black Award

Jul 2, 2010

• BLUE
• KingFisher

Author's Note

An alphabetic acrostic poem in which each line or stanza begins with a successive letter of the alphabet....

Reviews

[emma]

Wonderfully descriptive, so much detail in this impressive alphabetic acrostic.
I enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing!

[Raivenne]

A wonderful nature write and a perfectly executed Abecedarius! Thank you so much for participating in the challenge and giving the form such life!

[deeps]

I really enjoyed this write and teh photos were pefect.
Ths is wonderfully written.

[MissWordSmith]

i really enjoyed this, because the style was so simple, yet so much was said.
keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

Photos made words come alive. Nature is wonderful. I like the story and your description. We are lucky when we can see the mystery and beauty of this planet. A outstanding poem. your description and detail was amazing. A outstanding poem and photos.
Coyote