Tiny Feet

When I first saw you,
My heart missed a beat,
I felt so fresh and anew,
Touching your tiny feet.

Roses are soft and red,
So are you my little darling,
I’ll carefully lay you on bed,
My sweet angel without wing!

Soon you shall walk and run,
And chase those little birds,
Looking at you is so much fun,
To speak I’ve no words.

You are my god’s lovely gift,
A true blessing to be proud,
My motherhood you uplift,
And make me float in cloud.

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Awards / Badges won:

Beatiful

Sep 5, 2010

• Beautify Me
• Tiny Feet

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

This is so very sweet, tender and beautiful. Children are a special gift and its wonderful when their are seen as such, as in your poem. Love this, its wonderful!

[R E Tree]

this poem is so sweet and sensational. It has a peaceful gentle tone that is carried throughout the poem. The picture suits the poem and so does the pink font. I think the title is cute "Tiny Feet" is a lovely title. This poem describes the connection between you and your child emotional and caring. I think that is sweet and it says a lot about what kind of parent you are

[emmajoy]

Beautifully said and beautifully presented. ' You are my god’s lovely gift, ' - that say's it all.

Your poetry is always so happy.

[A.Lee]

Beautiful write. Children are such a precious blessing.

[Phibby Venable]

very beautiful & touching portrayal!

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A beautiful ode to your child, expressed with love and affection..we love them like only a mother can..!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a great way to express you love for you child. there are no words to describe how happy they make us sometimes. Children are a blessing and you have expressed this quite nicely.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very beautiful poem. Children are and will be the joy in a life. A sweet and and kind poem. I know the feeling. The first time I saw my now 14 year old baby. She stole my heart. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

Nothing can compare to a fresh sweet bundle sent from above~ the joy and

pride of having a newborn babe to cuddle in your arms is a treasure to behold

indeed; a well crafted piece so beautifully penned and deeply expressed in

poetic verse