Space

Space

All of the universe,

Or the room in a case,

Non-existent,

Without a trace.

Cannot be created,

Nor erased.

A stunning,

Abominable 

Disgrace,

That which is Space.

Author's Note

well?

Reviews

[Devons]

A very impactful and profound use of imagery and analogy to describe what is in essence existence itself - whether Man, creature, the elements, or life in general. It is also very three-dimensional in its aphorisms, portraying the subject with both awe and repulsion... as life indeed is... "A stunning, abominable disgrace.."
Excellent poem.

[KatiePie]

I like it. I completely agree with Devons.

[Elaine]

awesome man awesome

[Dupree]

It's a good piece, not the best form but then again form isn't everything. It's not the best I've read but it's not bad

[mope]

I like the idea of using a case
When travelling to out of space.

[Kanattas Atir Enomo]

i also agree with devon. great imagery and detail. you managed to cpture the essence of space in a powerful way in a short period of time. great wording and concept. good job.

[snapjack]

I agree with Devons, the poem has a lot of meaning behind it like the "Time" poem that you wrote. Great choice of words