Honey Did You Know?

Honey Did You Know?

A Poem by shweta

Honey, did you know?
That you had me all the way
With those softly spoken words,
That you chose to say.

Honey, did you know?
You always amaze me.
And that is one thing,
I’d surely like you to see.

Honey, did you know?
That even though you are not here,
I can always feel your love
Cause I hold you so near.

Honey, did you know?
I’ll always think of you this way
That’s why with you
My heart will always stay.

© 2012 shweta


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shweta
my first attempt at poetry..

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Sid
This is really good for your first poem, short and sweet you express a lot in just a few words and it all flow very naturally...well done!! Hope to see more poems from you!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Really nice... Less feelingz,less wordz bt they expresses a lot.... :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is pretty awesome for your first poem. It has lots of emotion within its words and it all flows smoothly. Well written, and kudos to you!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a very good poem. It kind of reminded my of the Christmas song Mary, Did you know. But that might have just been because of the repetition of the title (the title are very similar) Your first attempt is a success.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Roy
Very nice!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Honey, did you know?That even though you are not here,I can always feel your loveCause I hold you so near.
.....................What a beautiful word construction? I like your truthful thought and affectionate wordings. My best wishes.

Posted 7 Years Ago


very nice... your words hold truth in emotion and flows freely... thank you for sharing!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


A very nice 1st attempt. Flows well with sweet sentiment.

Posted 7 Years Ago


really nice,full of emotions
expressed well..
Keep writing!! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very NICE!! Can't believe this is the first attempt? Keep writing, I hope to see more!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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jaipur, India



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