Valley of Dreams

Valley of Dreams

A Poem by Sid

I walk down the valley
Set deep within my dreams
The lush green fields
The dancing daffodils
I gaze up at the azure sky
Serene in its embrace
When I see you
My angel from that sky
I move closer to you
Enveloped in your warmth
And I hold out my hand
Just to touch you
A fire inside me burns
A longing just to hold you
And drift away
One with the clouds
I remember the days
When you were mine
That warm embrace
And the gentle touch
I gaze in your eyes now
And tears, they flow
I hold your hands
And ask you why
“Why did you leave me?
In this world alone
To the Lord you went
Your warmth I need”
“Hold me close
In your loving memories
Love me forever and
I will live in you”
You say these words
And smile at me
I embrace you tight
To never let you go
I watch alone in reverie
As you fade away
Till I meet you again
In my valley of dreams.

© 2012 Sid


Author's Note

Sid
This is my first attempt at a love related poem and frankly I'm really doubtful about how it's turned out, so tell me what you think!

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if id known this was going to be love related before i read it, it turned out exactly as i wouldve expected from you. not straight lovey dovey, it has a sadness of lost love. beautifully penned. absolutely beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Yeah, I don't think I can do straight lovey dovey...thank you, glad you liked it!!
really liked the last line very much. had an emotional read. Keep writing


Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you like it!
a very nice poem, loved it

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you like it!!
Its good. Well-written and interesting. Good first attempt!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
A beautiful and hopeful poem of love. Dreams and love do walk hand in hand. I like the description of desire and dreams. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you like it!!
well it was far better than I could do with this genre..Well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you for the read and review Doc!
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Mia
Sid, NO! This is sad, I thought it was going to be lovey dovey and then BAM sadness. I'll forgive it for its sadness because it is absolutely beautiful!
“Hold me close
In your loving memories
Love me forever and
I will live in you”
Love those lines the most. Wonderful work as always...but I have come to expect that of you

Posted 9 Years Ago


Mia

9 Years Ago

My pleasure Sid, I'm glad my words mean a lot to you :)
Thank you very much!!
Sid

9 Years Ago

They sure do Mia :D
Mia

9 Years Ago

:D
This is beautiful :) Just beautiful. 100/100 for you. Too bad I can't give more :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you Becca, I wasn't sure about this, so I'm glad you like it!! :D
Becca Bishop

9 Years Ago

:D You should be more self-confident. I don't think I've read a single thing from you that I didn't .. read more
Sid

9 Years Ago

Just my first time writing a love related poem, so wasn't sure but I'll take your word for it so tha.. read more
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Tex
well I am a Sid fan so you have to remember that when I review your work :)

I just loved this. The longing for a love lost to another world was well put across. The last stanza was very strong. and this...

I remember the days
When you were mine
That warm embrace
And the gentle touch
I gaze in your eyes now
And tears, they flow
I hold your hands
And ask you why

great stuff.

A solid write... Nice work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you Nicholas I wasn't sure about this but your words give me confidence...Thanks again!!
Tex

9 Years Ago

congratulations on your contest win with this piece... well deserved.
Sid

9 Years Ago

Thanks Nicholas!!
i think that you did extremely well for a first effort. touching, romantic and full of wonderful imagery.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sid

9 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you like it!!

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Added on November 16, 2012
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