Miles Away!

Miles Away!

A Poem by Writer at last! Sky ~
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A journey of a single soul :)

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Miles Away!


I am walking on the snow & fading do you know?
My steps are slow, mind stumbling & shivering cold

Lone in this journey, I'll cross miles of roads
But I'm destined for my destiny & none other goals

Gently, I'll disappear, Miles away my love
Yes, miles away from you my love!

© 2023 Writer at last! Sky ~


Author's Note

Writer at last! Sky ~
You need to decide your destiny and walk through the roads.
Then it maybe a long lone journey or thousand years in love. Who knows?
Stay hungry, Stay foolish!

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A very emotive write which depicts the encounter of a lone journey and the struggle it is to walk miles away from the one you love. The best roads to walk are the roads less travelled, those roads which others avoid to walk the same road as everybody else, but they miss ssssssoooooo much by doing that, while on the roads less travelled you will find treasures which will remain with you for your whole lifetime and perhaps, Love is travelling that same road from the opposite direction looking for YOU! There are lots of mysteries to be solved on the road less travelled. You are different to all the others, I know you will enjoy it, Sky...

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Writer at last! Sky ~

2 Months Ago

I loves to be different Marie! And yes, I really enjoyed the journey so far. Thanks for understandin.. read more
Marie

2 Months Ago

Most welcome and as always I enjoy my visit with you too, Sky...



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A very emotive write which depicts the encounter of a lone journey and the struggle it is to walk miles away from the one you love. The best roads to walk are the roads less travelled, those roads which others avoid to walk the same road as everybody else, but they miss ssssssoooooo much by doing that, while on the roads less travelled you will find treasures which will remain with you for your whole lifetime and perhaps, Love is travelling that same road from the opposite direction looking for YOU! There are lots of mysteries to be solved on the road less travelled. You are different to all the others, I know you will enjoy it, Sky...

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Writer at last! Sky ~

2 Months Ago

I loves to be different Marie! And yes, I really enjoyed the journey so far. Thanks for understandin.. read more
Marie

2 Months Ago

Most welcome and as always I enjoy my visit with you too, Sky...
I can feel the emotion in this write. No nicely written and expressed

Posted 8 Months Ago


You convey a real feeling of a struggle and loneliness with this poem. The snow can be deep and walking in it in sub zero temperatures can hazardous. You have to keep going.

Chris

Posted 9 Months Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

9 Months Ago

Thanks for understanding Chrish.
Indeed few roads of life needs to be travelled alone!
Who knows, indeed! Love this! And the picture speaks a poem of its own.


Posted 9 Months Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

9 Months Ago

Thanks Seriana! I am glad that you enjoyed the read.
This is so lovely, Very nicely written and loved the rhyme scheme.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

9 Months Ago

Thanks writergurl.
Miles away from love in love with love :)
dear Poet... in my twenties I learned to Snow Ski... and then I went high up a Mountain by Chair (where I jumped off) and slowly descended in a few hours. The next year I went to a smaller Ski Resort and descended through a Trail in the Woods. A Fireside Rum and a Chat was all I needed to relax. I appreciate your Poem and I am grateful that I experienced a bit of Heaven on Earth at an early age. gently, Pat

Posted 1 Year Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

9 Months Ago

Thanks for your visit and review. Sky loves to ski⛷️ a lot
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JR
I certainly get the sense of isolation as the speaker walks through the snow. It brings up many questions... why leave his love? Clearly the farther he goes, the colder it gets... where is he going? The best writing leaves you with questions to ponder.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Writer at last! Sky ~

1 Year Ago

Yes JR, the more further he goes that more his journey get mysterious. Pondering is good at times! T.. read more

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