the moon

the moon

A Poem by marie
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a little on the spot writing:)

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        I saw the moon bright as day.
        It sang to me again.
        It danced with the stars, who did play,
        And said I was a friend
        
        The white man smiled on the waning nights;
        Scaring away little girls frights.
        Who are you? It asked again.
        I tell you the truth, I am a friend.

© 2015 marie


Author's Note

marie
sorry its bee so long since i've been on... its been kind of hectic lately:) i'll do my best to catch up on here and post plenty of new writings to make up for lost time:)

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I really enjoyed this write, has insight to it...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Some people are like the shining moon, so bright, bringing light to the scary night. I love this write, it made me enter a fantasy world. Thank you for sharing.

Insight.

Posted 8 Years Ago


marie

8 Years Ago

I believe everyone has the potential to shine in such a way. True, it's harder to find it in some, b.. read more
Insight "MH"

8 Years Ago

It did bring a shine to my face, and you are welcome.
marie

8 Years Ago

I'm so glad it did so:)
I need to catch up on writing too. But we still haven't gotten laptops so I won't be able to post until late afternoon. So to review this one: It's cute and childish but honestly not your best. I like the idea though. Now, when I post something -whenever that may be- it'll probably turn out bad...(Hey, would you look at that!? It's not a one word review!)

Posted 10 Years Ago


A lovely little poem. I very much enjoyed reading this! I think I understand what it means, but I'm mostly terrible with poems!

Posted 10 Years Ago


marie

10 Years Ago

Thanks i'm glad you liked it!:) and J a poem doesn't have a set meaning each person interprets their.. read more
so sweet, i simply loved the innocence. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


marie

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!:)
Prritiy

10 Years Ago

you are welcome :)
marie

10 Years Ago

:)
Look who's back (yeah! Look who's talking :))) ) anyway great job, interesting portray of the white man

Posted 10 Years Ago


marie

10 Years Ago

Thanks!:) its great to be back:)
I love the moon and the night sky!! You have described it mellifluously :)
Lovely line ' Scaring away little girls frights'


Posted 10 Years Ago


marie

10 Years Ago

Thanks you:)
We all seem to be fascinated by the moon, it has a vibrant pull and makes us feel safe, nicely pen'd.

Posted 10 Years Ago


marie

10 Years Ago

thank you:) its great to hear from ya:)
Nice and short sweet poem. Very cute!

Posted 10 Years Ago


marie

10 Years Ago

Thank you soo much:)
Very sweet poem.. :)
thumbs up :)


Posted 10 Years Ago


marie

10 Years Ago

Thank you!:)

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Added on July 1, 2013
Last Updated on October 28, 2015
Tags: moon, friend, stars, nights, smile, frights, ask, answer, little, girl

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