The Nobodies

The Nobodies

A Poem by DontBlink158

Shifting in the Shadow's

Lurking in the depth

 

Seeing the things

no one cares to show

 

They have no name

They have no image

 

They are the feeling of being watched

when you're up to no good

 

Everywhere and nowhere

They are the nobodies.

 

Our wrongs

Our rights

 

Our truths

Our lies

 

Nobodies are us

© 2012 DontBlink158


Author's Note

DontBlink158
I'm just working on it. I'll most likely change it around or add/drop a few lines. But comments are welcome as always!

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i love it keep up the work

Posted 8 Years Ago


wow a kind of creeper vibe to it i like it. ^_^ nice deffinatly a good job on the feel and flow

Posted 8 Years Ago


:0 I really lik this. I fought the earge to look over my shoulder just to make sure they aren't here. Now. :) good stuff!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Like the way you work on the theme of identity,especially liked the fourth line,had a kind of mischevious effect.Good write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


nicely written

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Hey I'm a girl, lets get that straight. Im extreamly wierd (ask any of my friends i have issues). Oh yeah, im a age between 10 and 25. What ever you guess you are wrong. I love to write, i have finish.. more..

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