The Nobodies

The Nobodies

A Poem by DontBlink158

Shifting in the Shadow's

Lurking in the depth


Seeing the things

no one cares to show


They have no name

They have no image


They are the feeling of being watched

when you're up to no good


Everywhere and nowhere

They are the nobodies.


Our wrongs

Our rights


Our truths

Our lies


Nobodies are us

© 2012 DontBlink158

Author's Note

I'm just working on it. I'll most likely change it around or add/drop a few lines. But comments are welcome as always!

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i love it keep up the work

Posted 8 Years Ago

wow a kind of creeper vibe to it i like it. ^_^ nice deffinatly a good job on the feel and flow

Posted 8 Years Ago

:0 I really lik this. I fought the earge to look over my shoulder just to make sure they aren't here. Now. :) good stuff!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Like the way you work on the theme of identity,especially liked the fourth line,had a kind of mischevious effect.Good write.

Posted 8 Years Ago

nicely written

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on March 3, 2012
Last Updated on March 3, 2012



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