My Mustang

My Mustang

A Poem by Leo
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Literally about My Mustang

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That anticipated moment

Of the turn of her ignition switch

Unleashes 400 wild horses with a single twitch

Now I’m feeling wired and enraged

 

So I rev up her engine and with a blink of an eye she is engaged

I floor it on highway  road and burn some rubber

Porsche and ChevySS quickly take a cover and hide like a thunder

Might sound like a thunder yet a big blunder!

 

Out on a Beautiful breezy night with my Mustang shifting gears

I look to my right and I see a BMW and to my left a Camaro

Girls complain men don’t listen - so I deliberately turn off her stereo

 

Haha

 

Focusing instead on her V8 bad a*s engine roar

Hell! No mood swings only RPMs, controlled by my gas pedal

Doesn’t talk back or whine nor bail or complain

Makes a man’s troubles fade and disdain

But boy do you have a legal prescription for that true hurricane!

© 2015 Leo


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This is not terrible. Testosterone fueled but articulate.

I f*****g hate Richard Siedel but, he's a legend and writes about his motorcycles in a similar way.

You aint legendary good like he is... but you're okay.

I can take this and enjoy... that's a good day for everyone I think

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leo

8 Years Ago

Well nevertheless you enjoyed it..thanks for dropping by



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Altho I’ve never been enthralled by a car myself (motorcycles, yes, but not cars) . . . I’ve been around enuf motorheads to get your drift loud & clear. I like your way of playing with a scattering of rhyme & the best part: turning off the stereo so you can “listen to her” (good one!) All in all, this is a little clunky as far as flow . . . your passages could be a little more smooth & va-va-voom! But your overall message is true to the life & packed with good details (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Nice experesion love forward to your car.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leo

7 Years Ago

Thanks Martin..her name is Eleanor ;)
Wow what a contrast to The Valley! Life in the fast lane, lived full on!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Leo

7 Years Ago

hmm the valley was produced 9 years ago..
thanks
Nice poem stanger. I liked this line "No mood swings only RPMs"

Posted 7 Years Ago


Leo

7 Years Ago

haha thanks buddy
Lol. I like this.. Mustang is my favorite sport's car. I really like the body-style of the 2016/17 'Stangs.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

mustang is my dream car. I could visualise everything as i read the poem, great work

Posted 8 Years Ago


Leo

8 Years Ago

Thanks buddy..mine is a 2006 GT V8 4.6L..I wish I can get the 2014 though: 0-60 in 4.2 seconds ;)
This is not terrible. Testosterone fueled but articulate.

I f*****g hate Richard Siedel but, he's a legend and writes about his motorcycles in a similar way.

You aint legendary good like he is... but you're okay.

I can take this and enjoy... that's a good day for everyone I think

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leo

8 Years Ago

Well nevertheless you enjoyed it..thanks for dropping by
An excellent [poem. I like cars and racing as you do. They do make statements. Bravo.................

Posted 8 Years Ago


Leo

8 Years Ago

Thanks Sami glad u liked it..I just had to show some respect for my stang :)
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are welcome. ...:)))))
Oh, this is just painful! Hurt me, Hurt me!

See, my first car was a '69 with a 289! Got it cheap but 16 years of age, not only could I not afford to put work into the battered body, but I learned a man had been shot in the head by a jealous bf (he was makin' out in the back seat at the time)...the friend of the man that sold me the car.

Thanks for...ruining my afternoon...just playin'


Posted 8 Years Ago


Leo

8 Years Ago

Omg damnnnnnnnn. .Sell this idea as true story to hollywood :).thanks for dropping by Antonio ;)
I enjoyed this I could feel the adrenaline of taking her for a spin, putting her to the test, and putting others to shame... though not a huge fan of mustangs I did like the poem. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leo

8 Years Ago

Glad you liked it..although I need to take of her more :)
Rachael Lea

8 Years Ago

you just gave me an idea! Thanks.
talk of her more?
or take her on more spins?
.. read more
Leo

8 Years Ago

Oh yeah she's my baby no doubt about that May God bless her engine

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Added on October 19, 2015
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Tags: Mustang, American Muscle, Sports cars

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