Gift of Desperation

All the time trapped in a never ending cycle never knowing when it would end. I wake up and realize that I can share my love with the world everyday and make a difference. I am free.

Line too thin I can't see the road, 

bright lights ahead, time to unload

Sit as I wait my terminal expired,

the gate always open, souls I admired

Electric in the air, the breeze its calling,

waves strike me down, castles are falling

Seeping and weeping veins they expand,

mountains around me, no room to land

Vows to make calm fierce tides of late,

darkness enthralls me, leading to fate

No sword in hand fighting unarmed alone,

prayers like snowflakes, leading me home  

High above the clouds in a smoky infusion,

relief washes over me, no more confusion

Dove soaring by me Greek goddess in sight,

Angels watching over this phantom of light.

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Reviews

[Cindy Marietta]

This has a great rhyme scheme, and is very unique. Great poem :)

[Steve87]

Thanks amanda

[Jennifer Shaw]

I love this so much! It's beautiful. I can tell that you are filled with an abundance of love by the way that you write. You paint beautiful pictures with your words. Such a gift is rare.

[Steve87]

Thank you Jennifer. I appreciate you're review it's good to know there are others out there with similar thoughts and belief. I often feel so lost in this world just alone

[EMMIE]

Great flow, easy to read but the content is rather unique! Great work!

[Steve87]

thankyou i hope unique in a good way :)

[Patrick McCloskey]

Beautiful, dad though it is

[Steve87]

ah ok then

[Ghost of Jupiter]

This is a amazing piece Steve, and as Ana said, it reads well with a good balance of light and dark. I love your positive description of the poem above with sharing your love with the world. I am sure you have so much to give.

[Steve87]

I am really glad you liked it and thank you so much for your review, i'm learning to love a day at a time :) takes practice

[Steve87]

I am quite proud of this poem. It is not the easiest to read what I truly meant but if you have an opinion please let me know thanks

[Matching Socks]

There's a good balance here of the positive and negative.
Nothing worth having cones easy, nor does a life worth living..

[Steve87]

Thanks Ana I hope it read well I know I have room for improvement. Fairly new to this

[Matching Socks]

It read well, you're welcome. :)