Her Lips plea For Him Too......

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Her soul burns with an unknown love

while her mind urges her

lips to go talk to him.

Heat rises in her cheeks,

and emotion scents the air she breathes.

Her lips plea for the touch of romance

that dresses his body.

 

Eyes glance her way,

and hope flies around like butterflies,

she prays time will send him her way.

Pain lays shattered at her feet

like broken glass as he

dances and holds another tight.

Yearning for him turns into

the champagne she holds,

and she swallows passion with each drop.

 

She looks inside herself,

and is shocked at the empty hours

she has spent waiting for a love that

only lives in her broken heart.

Yet, her lips plea for the taste of his warmth.

The pain cuts flesh as she leaves once again,

alone.

 

Author's Note

Tell me what you think! Art by Rob Hefferan

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem build imagery of the smoky dark night spot of detective novels that I just absolutely love. The admiration she feels for this man is truly special and heartfelt. There a a lot of questions that roam through my mind. Sexy but elegant and written with class...leaving us wanting to approach her and create a happy ending.

[trainwreck]

Lost souls looking for love. Good job showing this.

[KAREN]

Thanks!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good imagination.!!

[VelvetRosetta]

A yearning passion built on thoughts...wishing for something that has not yet happened and wondering if it ever will...heartfelt.

[Poetic Beauty]

Those days are in the past for me but I know this tale a little all too well

[Christina]

Such a beautiful and passionate poem of unrequited love. I love the word choice and imagery in this poem, your writing is elegantly descriptive, I could feel the yearning heartbreak and emotion within this poem. Thank you for sharing.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

intense write...I kinda felt her feelings of desperation too

[Coyote Poetry]

People get locked up in fear and close all doors. They are hard to be open. I like the description of the woman to the desire to escape alone. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Brad]

can someone tell me why love has to be so painful? i tihnk J. Geils had it right "love stinks" yeah yeah... :)

[Star Wolf]

Sad tale in this tragic romantic poem. So often one lover is left behind. Awesome write.