i love you

here i am
waiting here
under the rain
with my tears
and my only fears..
here i am
running over the road
and crying over my word
that i said once
and will never be again
i have known  you yesterday
i loved you today
and i will adore you tomorrow
im moving on my way
but i will never  forget the day
where i saw your eyes
i will never forget the day
that Ive known your name in
i will never forget your memories
because i will adore you
for the rest of my life
i will think about you
for my whole life
i will cry over you for the rest of my  life
and when  you need me
i will be on the same road
waiting for you under the rain 

Author's Note

if there is any more mistakes tell me
and thanks for helping

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Excellent flow and cute poem.

'but i will never forget the day
when i saw your sincere eyes
i will never forget the day
you told me your name'

[Fontane Wong]

Charming and touching. The strong feeling that you have for you another is forever and sweet. So heart wrenching. You and the other are both flowing on the same river, the love you have for each other is scrabbing in your heart, one day, you both will meet each other at the sea. The love that's unlocked well for times will be expelled again, the feeling would continue, the love will last forever. A brilliant write, adore it so much.

[Candy]

It's cute.. But, there is missing something. I didn't feel like I wanted to keep reading. You have to make a rythme and make a sound, so everyone want to here what you're saying. But still, you have to make it slow or fast. So people can feel your anger, your love. Thanks for a sweet poem. It was nice. (:

[E.V. Black]

The sweetness in here is so...SWEET that it's heart-wrenching. I think it very much reflects the sensitive soul you have inside of you. Love, especially the first kind, is never forgotten. I have never forgotten my first crush. I still think of him from time to time. Beautiful, lovely, and painful all at the same time. You're a wonderfully sweet poet. Thank you for this piece!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

This is exquisite and the art you have created with the format is divine, a tree perhaps?

[sweet candy]

it's lovely,i like it
keep the good work :D

[Enigma]

A beautiful poem. But the flow is a bit disrupted with typing errors. You might want to go through the poem again and correct them.
The scene is very well potrayed, anyhow, and is enhanced by clever choice of words. Good job!