An Ex-Love letter

love is only for those to believe it so

 

You Know Who You are,

The feelings you tell,
are nothing but lies.
I see how you love,
all those other guys.
I’ve made my decision,
I will no longer wait.
Your obvious lies,
create nothing but hate.
Not hate of you,
or the decisions you choose.
I have more hate for myself,
in the end, I will lose.
You will not realize,
the truth is too late.
The way i loved you,
has succumbed to cruel fate.
Hope you feel lucky,
you’ve won the grand prize.
One stupid guy,
Whom feel for your lies.
I will try and move on,
one day soon you will know,
the love I gave you,
is reality's, true show.

Was love,
Anonymous

Reviews

[Voice11]

I think it's a decent piece of writing. ofcourse you know better of the situation this piece of writing is about.

[STurner]

Powerful poem. A lot of pain. I'm glad you decided to move on. Someone better is on the way.

[ABitBrokenPoetry]

"I have more hate for myself,
in the end, I will lose." love this line. we've all been there. heartbreak well put. a deeply sad write.

[J.R Schlievert]

you were hurt at one point *sniffle* i feel your pain BRO!!!!!!!

[Lizanne]

A very wise poetic brush-off to an untrue love. How well you poetically put into words the feelings about what someone did and how you will treat them thereafter. But you did so in a mature and rational way.

[Edalene Connell]

I enjoyed this. Sometimes it is hard to move on, but sometimes it's for the best.