In Heavenly Accordance

How pleasing visions of past yesterdays

weave tapestries 'pon blissful memories.

Each season's gifting gathered our bouquets,

so tenderly unfurled love's mysteries.

Ahhh, vernal lushness teasing blush of youth,

forever bonding restless hearts anew!

Whilst Summertime's elapse, bears loving truth ...

'tis perfect union ~ glorious in view.

Still, drifting Autumn winds, hush ... bid farewell;

true love adapts, as gilded moments fade.

Throughout shared years in peaceful solace dwell,

('twas Winter's icy chill ~ sweet lovers played).

Together, harvest bountiful reward ...

two Soulmates thrive 'neath Heaven's great accord.

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

A lovely melding embrace in the seasonings of the seasons grace in these lines you placed:) you have such a nice rhythm rhyme and flowing voice in this Susan:)

[Susan 🦋]

Awwww sweet review! Thank you kindly :-)

[Pete]

the picture is simply breathtaking and your words do it justice. beautiful sentiment. love, seasons and bountiful harvest all ours for the taking according to the way it was divinely meant to be ... :)

[Susan 🦋]

Hi Pete! You got the meaning :-) I love that picture too...thanks for reading.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You entice and delight with such brilliance, Susan. Your sonnet is well versed and eloquently written. Simply beautiful, but then how could you miss with such an image?

[Susan 🦋]

Hi Kelly, thank you for reading and leaving such a wonderful review!! Much appreciated. :-)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A very beautiful sonnet written in wonderful metre and rhyme with such descriptions in a romantic and sublime portrait.

[Susan 🦋]

Thank you kindly :-) I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.

[Richard🖌]

Gosh, Susan 🍂
What an enthrallingly beautiful English Sonnet you've painted into my appreciative mind and vibrant imagination.
Your word choices, syntax, metaphor, and imagery make this a true virtual masterpiece of romantic moment for any warmblooded heart to thrill over.
You've borrowed from spirituality, Nature, promise, and emotion, and blended it all into your ink to dance upon the page before our smitten eyes.
I tried to highlight a verse, but the entire poem is just too brilliant to allow it … KUDOS!
And, your picture choice is wondrously embracing.

Wonderful, Dear Poetess … marvelous, indeed!
Thank you for sharing a scintillating taste of what love looks and feels like to You! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Susan 🦋]

Very pleased you enjoyed this sonnet. :-) Thank you for the wonderful feel good review. Much appreciated.

[Richard🖌]

"feel good review"?
Yes, indeed, I enjoyed it very much.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the combining of spiritualism, nature and the love between two meant to find each other, and share all of the seasons together.
Beautiful wording in this.
j.

[Susan 🦋]

You got it!! That is exactly what I was trying to convey! :-) Thank you so much for the lovely review, I do appreciate it. :-)

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

This is wonderful beautiful I loved it just what I needed this Monday morning !!!

[Susan 🦋]

Happy Monday to you!! I am pleased you liked this so much :-) thank you! have a wonderful day.

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Oooh I just re read this
Still feel the same
Nothings changed after three years just my looks lol