Paint a smile

  I paint a smile

  on your face.

  i make your

  lips curve upwards

  in an human

  way.

  i add perfect

  details to your

  lips, crimson 

  with fresh blood

  from a vampire's

  victim. 

  once i am done,

  painting your smile,

  i rip it to shreds.

  and then i cry. 

Author's Note

i write such fucked up poems...

Reviews

[CharlesMonroe]

I really like this :O I love fucked up poems and the imagery they create. This one is actually beautiful in a very strange way lol, but I agree with Mariah, it deffinitlly sounds like you need to vent :P I love this (:
100/100

[Mariah Jane]

Wow... this shows so much in the way of hurt. The need to vent is evident. I like this. You shouldn't be so hard on yourself. The poem is wonderful! If you think yours are messed up, you should see mine :) Keep it up. This is very good.

[The old me]

its pretty good. nice job. :)

[compositionc]

NO YOU DON'T.
This is a really good poem.

[halflives]

Well done.
It's not bad. It's far from it.