I will just lie

  When you ask me

  if im okay, i will

  smile and laugh and 

  say yes.

  when you hug me

  and wonder 

  if i'll be fine,

  i will smile and say

  yes.

  when you hold me

  in the dark, and kiss

  my hair,

  i will just lie

  and say i wanna

  be here. 

Author's Note

i just made this up

Reviews

[DANGER]

that's good, bbbetter

[compositionc]

It's really good. I loved it.
:D

[quinfinn]

very profoundly expressed and masterfully written. this is a swansong to devotion.
great job!

[Naomi Roseღ]

The last stanza was awesome. I loved this poem, Norah. I could relate a lot to it. Keep writing!!

[CharlesMonroe]

This is very pretty (: I love it. Great job my dear ^_^

[Mariah Jane]

This is very true of so many people. But it doesn't have to be. Truth rings the truest... always.
As far as the write goes, I like it. Its very well written and meaningful. Meaningful is always good. Its the things that mean nothing to us that always feel wrong. Very good write.

[halflives]

Agreed, good write. Though I'm not the biggest fan of when people lie and say that they're okay when they're really not. I want them to come out with it so I can work on making them feel better :D

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Good write.
People lie all the time, but that's normal..because sometimes people aren't okay.