Thirteen days ago

  I saw you again,

  at least thirteen

  days ago.

  you were on

  a stage, made of

  rose petals and

  skeletons.

  the crowd was

  busy, buzzing

  with excitement 

  as you took

  the stage.

  your guitar was

  swinging down

  by your knees,

  bouncing as

  you walked along.

  the crowd started

  to clap and holler,

  even though it didnt

  happen yet.

  you walked to

  the center

  of the stage,

  and the room fell

  quiet, as if

  someone just died.

  your fingers

  hit the strings

  and everyone gasped. 

  the rest of the 

  musicians soon

  joined the stage,

  but everyone

  payed attention

  to you.

  you stared

  at me with 

  your empty

  green eyes.

  and a smile

  formed on

  your face.

  i saw you

  thirteen days

  ago.

  i had a dream

  about you

  thirteen

  days

  ago

Author's Note

this was some weird ass dream i had a while ago.

Reviews

[TheRavenQueer]

My dreams are always strange. Awesome poem!! Loved it. :)

[quinfinn]

nice dream. nice name ...return of the living dead? "tina...i can smell your brains. if you love me you'll let me eat your brains!" love your poem...very cool!

[compositionc]

payed attention=paid attention

Incredibly powerful poem, but wow, a dream? That's intense.

[CharlesMonroe]

This is really pretty, you did amazing at explaining the dream, and the imagery was just beautiful (: I loved it :D
100/100

[realmwriter]

Pardon please the question, but the weirdness beggs, where you high? Cause regardless of the answer I like this poem, Very well put together and a very disturbing dreamy image, Loved it, Thank you.

[Mariah Jane]

This poem felt very empty... like the emptiness of his green eyes. I like that. It helped pull you into the feeling of the poem. It is very well done. Dreams are a great way to write... they always give me great ideas... just as this one was. Great Job!

[NickyGL]

Odd, dream i must say. but a cool one. This poem is good, well put together and its powerfull and full of emotions. Well done. Hope to read more of your work soon.

[halflives]

Wowza. Powerful poem. Well done.