chapter 4 my baby eliza

chapter 4 my baby eliza

A Chapter by the happy pickle

Jake's pov

Knock knock knock coming says jake as he openes the door he sees mindy and a baby her name is eliza and sshe is yours mindy says I was going get rid of her but then your girlfriend went crazy and made me have a dreams of when she died I felt all the pain she felt take her and leave me alone mindy says and she leaves the baby at my door step I pick her up and call my mom and she comes and brings everything she walks in to see eliza sleeping in my arms seems she has taken a liking to you the older lady asks its oct  27th oh it is isnt it that's my I got her the flowers she loved the most and we could go pay her our respects the older lady says as she grabs eliza 
We stop at the grave that has her name on it 

                                     Eilza jane andams 1991 - 2013 
                              Beloved daughther, sister , and friend 
                                       Rest in peace 
 Hey there its me again you might not remember who you where but let me remind you
Where smart, crazy beautiful but thats not why i loved you i loved you bucause when I fell down you picked me up and when you fell you never looked down maybe its because you lived life with no regects and th ats what I loved about you. You always looked fear sight in the eye you never backed down but always looked up . Even if the world stops spinning I wont forget you. I sing to the grave and I hear a baby cry and then my mom walks up and hands me her my she still crys so I put her next to jane and she stops and see loots like she's playing 

Eliza's pov 

Hello there you look just like your dad said a woman she looked pretty and when I was with her I feft loved and warmth and calm she sat down next to me and started playing she never asked why we where here but instead she leaned on a grave stone and she smiled. I like her  I think  mama I say my dad and a old lady that's your grandma the woman said looked at me and I reach for the woman and start screaming mama mama and my dad just looks as if he seen a ghost but I didn't care I just wanted that lady to be with me forever 

Jake's pov 

I feel calm and at peace all the things I felt when I was with her maybe she's here 
 m-mom do you see yep she said mama mama eliza cries shhhhh baby I say as I pick her up but she just srirms and crys even more  mama mama  then I feel the same feelings again and eliza stops crying and stays still. We get to the home and I put eliza in the crib next to my bed and leave the room I come back to check on her because she isn't crying and I see the crib rocking and a womanly shadow is looking down at her and she's playing saying mama mama. Jane I say runing to the shadow but it was gone 


© 2014 the happy pickle


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Added on October 12, 2014
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the happy pickle
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the land of aaa, the candy kingdom, United Kingdom



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