The Madness Within

The Madness Within

A Chapter by therisa

Insanity central.

Where
The truth is
A bold faced lie.

Told
To comfort us.

Through
The long nights
Of Winter.

As our darkest thoughts
Prowl around
Looking for
Any weakness
To exploit.

Like a Wendigo
On the outlook
For those
To prey on.

Consuming us
Until nothing remains
But a small pile
Of splintered bones
Marking our grave.

As we curl up
Inward mentally
Seeking release
From what
Taints us.


© 2015 therisa


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It's a bit maddening trying to decipher who's who and what's what, where is the truth.
But sometimes you just have to hope for the best and trust your judgement.

Posted 9 Years Ago


therisa

9 Years Ago

Sadly, Ana, too often. I find myself, questioning everything, I do.
paranoia weakens us ....we get to not believe our own selves when it comes to truths. Maybe because we hide behind the lies we tell ourselves for so long..
it is difficult to get that release...and we are consumed until there is nothing left but the bare bones of devastation.

Posted 9 Years Ago


therisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Jacob. I wonder, did anyone get my reference to the Wendigo? An Algonquian legend, warnin.. read more
Bitter, angry, and defiant, another impactful piece. One comment, although bold could be the intention here, the expression is "bald-faced" normally -- however, this take on it works.

Posted 9 Years Ago


therisa

9 Years Ago

Thank you, KL. I used "bold", because it felt right to me, and yes, I do tend mottle up phrases, lik.. read more

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therisa
therisa

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