great winds

Great winds blow and breezes flow

Late whines the old who truly know

While the young grow slow

But wisdom glows for all to sow

With age comes time

We won’t let go nor forget

Life will sort those who yearn

And those who won’t

For the wind blows for all to see.

 

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your poem harkens to how life can be so unpredictable. Just when some people believe their ducks are in a row, the wind comes up & renders a scene unrecognizable. I love that your winds discombobulate young & old, wise & clueless . . . we are all being blown to smithereens . . . maybe we'll end up sharing a chapter we could never have foreseen (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Mauricio Montoya]

thank you Margie may the wind flow with you.

[Coyote Poetry]

True words written my friend.
"While the young grow slow
But wisdom glows for all to sow"
The wealth of a long life. We made many mistakes and we try not to repeat. Good to be young, I tell the children. I tell them to travel, test life and have some fun. While you can. Outstanding poetry my good friend.
Coyote