Blue Bewilderment

The tangled life strolling this night

Smashing the glass veil on a heart

Sensing another cover 

Beyond the hill

The sun single formed

A memory of lakes filled with frozen ice

Fantasy engaged in purple dream

The mood was set to turn 

Scenes of autumn burnt the record

Hosting a play only in the mind

Touching the hollow image

Asking the winds to plead

The testament of your reality

Out of white cut out memory

Fast was the potion running through seeds

A spur of miraculous growth

Thinking of malice

Saying this must be hope

For once 

This is a defined form of light

The fingers you placed from a distance

Holding something i left untold

Healing beyond our thoughts

A stare from skin to bone

Perpetual 

Under the surface

Pronouncing shades of light 

Reviews

[onceloved]

Your words flow together so soft beautifully as poetry is post to be. :) Larry

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much Larry. You just made my day

[Celie Rose]

Such a poetic poem. It is beautiful. It is spontaneous and I like the imagery. "Fantasy engaged in purple dream." Well written and expressed.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Celie

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Gentle and beautiful. Words are like wings. We can fly and touch all beauty what you create for us. thank you very much.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Martin

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is like a record that wanted to play beautiful harmony and instead just started skipping, because the grooves became filled with doubt.
and the song could not be exposed, as the needle danced back and forth aimlessly...

anyway..me being an oldie but goodie from the 45 rpm days...saw this in probably a different light.

but love it.

[Nisreen]

I love your take on it .... I still listen to records .... Thanks J

[jacob erin-cilberto]

me too...i have much vinyl...about 600 albums...and still pull those out...the fullest sound.

[Centipedle]

It feels like I just know this poem. It's very deep, and beautiful all the same. Pen on!

[Nisreen]

Thank you for your review

[PhoenixDown]

This one speaks to me. I am going to let this one absorb more. This runs so parallel with a few things I have written & am working on.

[Nisreen]

Sounds great ..... :)

[The Fallen King]

keep up the great work. I will be coming back to look for more writings.

[Nisreen]

Thank you so much :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

You have captured beautifully emotions which often defy description. Our words bleed, too. I guess our words seek redemption too. They don't always find it, but I guess we feel better when they try.

[Nisreen]

I saw a form of light .... healing .... love i guess

Thank you for your review

[SleeplessVolcano]

love and malice in the same poem? I guess it is possible.....

[Nisreen]

Oh no ..... that was my mind at that point in time .... thinking is this malice .... is he trying to hurt me .... and then looking within and realizing not at all !!

[Darian B.]

Wow. I have fallen in love with your style. The way you are able to portray so much more than what you actually say is amazing. "Smashing the glass veil on a heart" "A memory of lakes filled with frozen ice" "healing beyond our thoughts." These lines, and many others have so many implications of deeper meaning. I love it, I really do.

[Nisreen]

Thank you Darian .... guess i am trying to release some emotion

[Darian B.]

The life of a poet... it's the way we know how I guess

[GalaxyGhost]

4th stanza before the end, "I" needs capitalization. Other than that, the poem looks well done and the accompanying picture sets a nice tone to the poem!

[Nisreen]

Thanks for stopping by