Spring

Spring

A Poem by ...

Forest newly dressed

wearing her emerald green

she dreams of summer

© 2016 ...


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lovely, refreshing Haiku. It is amazing how much can be expressed if the form is mastered , as you have.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Only 11 words but you captured it all. Beautiful !

Posted 2 Years Ago


forest, newly dressed
in her emerald, green dress
dreams of summer,on her mind
as she bathes in the sunshine ...

Posted 2 Years Ago


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2 Years Ago

hank you wordman
 wordman

2 Years Ago

you`re welcome
A amazing poem. You said enough to create a visions of Spring waiting for Summer to arrive. Thank you Lynn for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

I am humbled by all your time, John. thank you for your kind words
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome dear Lynn.
Nice job personifying the forest . . . love the emerald green . . . dreaming of summer.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

I don't know how I missed your review. Please forgive my late response and thank you, dear poet
This is beautiful. Nature is full of wisdom. The forest full of mystery and so often symbolizes our deepest desires and subconscious needs. I love the image of the forest dressing up after winter's barren ball.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thank you my dear :)
very well written . i like how you personify spring and use the imagery mainly for the poem. what season is your favorite? Mine actually is spring and autunm cause in spring everything flourishes and in autumn the leafs change to such beautiful colors.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

I like all of the seasons for their own essence but fall I think is my favorite. It's the harvest..... read more
As always, well written on nature.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thank you Adams
I never thought of spring as a new dress for the forest, a very cool thought.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Thank you so much James :)
simple, beautiful, indirect way to describe spring. the forest is like a future bride looking forward to being betrothed to summer. sweet little one, Lynn.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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3 Years Ago

Yes! Absolutely, just like that...
Thank you so much, Woody (((you)))

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