Samantha's Story Pt. 1

Samantha's Story Pt. 1

A Poem by Calypso
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A story in poem about a lost, dead girl.

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Samantha’s End

 

Gone within the night.

“Thee be missed,” Said the priest

Death isn’t the end

© 2012 Calypso


Author's Note

Calypso
1.Top Haiku
Dec 1, 2011
Haiku Contest

2. Best
May 15, 2012
P-O-E-T-R-Y



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short but great, i liked it awesome job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Great! I like it(: I like the last line the best. "death is not the End." you're very wise and very right.

Posted 11 Years Ago


A great haiku which contains the narrative of someone who dies in their sleep and cuts to a scene with a priest giving a speech of the dearly departed. The only thing though, the second line I'm counting has 6 syllables instead of 7 :/ other than that, the poem is pretty flawless. I enjoyed it :) thnx for the RR.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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